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by Douglas Hill


[A diner in a one-horse town; a little after ten o’clock on a Thursday night in late summer. FRANK, a young man who’s barely entered his twenties, sits alone at a table with an empty plate in front of him. DEBBIE ENTERS with a pitcher of iced tea. She is about the same age as him.]

DEBBIE: How’re we doing over here? Need a refill? Made it with bottled water…?

FRANK: No, I think I’m about done.

DEBBIE: (taking the plate from the table) How’d you like that country-fried steak? –I told ya it was good. Huh?

FRANK: (smiling warmly at her) It was real good. Must be the second best thing in here tonight.

DEBBIE: (enjoying his flirt) Oh, this late in the shift, I’m pretty sure it’s the best thing in here.

FRANK: (he grins) Well, in that case, I think the check is all that’s left, and then I’ll get out of your way; let you close up.

DEBBIE: (she starts to walk off without leaving the check at his table) All right, cowboy; well you have a good night, okay?

FRANK: UHH… the check...?

DEBBIE: (after a sheepish look at him) Here’s where it gets awkward.

FRANK: You’re kidding me. Same guy?

DEBBIE: Look, I told him. But he gave me a twenty dollar tip—on your fifteen dollar check.

FRANK: I don’t want anyone else paying for my supper. You were standing right there—last night—did you think I was joking?

DEBBIE: (she chuckles at him) I know, but, you weren’t going to leave me a twenty dollar tip, were you?

FRANK: (He tersely gathers his jacket.) This is the last time I’m coming in here. The last.

DEBBIE: Don’t get mad. All he did was pay for your supper—

FRANK: (at the same time, putting on his jacket) And it’s a crying shame, because I really did like the country-fried steak.

DEBBIE: Sweetie, I don’t get it—I really don’t. I wish someone would buy me supper once in a while.

FRANK: Do you even know this guy? (Beat.) You don’t, do you?

DEBBIE: He just started coming in here this week. About the same time as you started showing up.

FRANK: Okay, Pollyanna, listen up: This is what crazy people do. They stalk someone at a diner or a gas station and—

DEBBIE: Oh, come on.

FRANK: —and then someone ends up being…tortured…and killed. Even in a little hick town like this. You should read a newspaper once in a while.

DEBBIE: Hold on there, cowboy. It’s just supper.

FRANK: No. The first time he did it, it was just supper. This makes three times in a row. He’s watching me come in here, night after night.

DEBBIE: Maybe because he wants to thank you for working on the water tower.

FRANK: Really? Do you know how much your town is paying us to clean up those red worms in that water tower? I’m making a bundle of cash, sweetheart. I can afford to buy my own supper. But every time you let that sociopath pay for it, you let him invade my privacy – you let him feel like he and I are friends, or that I’m obligated to him on some level.

DEBBIE: He’s not asking for anything in return. He just pays and walks away. He seems like a very sweet guy.

FRANK: I can’t believe this. I bust my butt on a 12-hour day, and then come in here to get the third degree from some waitress about how nice the local stalkers are. Are you really this stupid?

DEBBIE: Okay. You’re right: I shouldn’t have done it.

FRANK: (plowing on ahead) And you know, it’d be different if this town didn’t roll up the sidewalks at nine every night. But you’re the only place open, other than the Seven-Eleven. So I’m forced to come in here if I want some decent food. And you? (falsetto) “Oh, you’ve got a twenty-dollar bill for me, sugar? Why sure you can pay for his supper. For an extra ten, I can find out his hotel room number for you. I’m really that naïve!”

DEBBIE: I apologize – and you can leave now. We’re closed.

FRANK: (still not listening to her) And then I end up with my throat cut open at the Super Eight, and for what? Twenty dollars? Don’t you see how irresponsible you’re being? And what are you going to do with a measly twenty dollars that will—

DEBBIE: I’m going to buy a box of Pop-Tarts from the Seven-Eleven! Okay?

FRANK: Oh! Well, I’ll be dead but at least you’ll have some Pop-Tarts.

DEBBIE: (She shouts him down.) They’re not for me; they’re for my son! And if that’s what it takes for him to stop being mad at me, then… (She immediately changes course.) You know, you’ve got so many problems. Oh. All the money coming at you from your high paying job, and strangers buying meals for you—

FRANK: Oh, and now you’re going to make fun of me? Great.

DEBBIE: (whipping out her check-pad) …chicken-fried steak, side salad, glass of iced tea. There! (she rips off the check and slams it down on the table.) Fourteen dollars and eighty cents. You want to pay for your meal? Let’s go ring you up so you can get the heck out of here.


FRANK: The point is not paying twice for my meal—what is wrong with you? The point is I don’t want some backwoods thug paying for my meal.

DEBBIE: I think the real point is you’re scared to let someone do something nice for you.

FRANK: Oh my gosh.

DEBBIE: And here’s a news flash: People who pay for your meal aren’t exactly thugs! Around here it’s called being generous. You should read a newspaper once in a while.

FRANK: So it’s all the same to you: generosity, stalking…?

DEBBIE: Oh no: stalking doesn’t come with a free chicken fried steak.

[Beat. FRANK smiles.]

FRANK: Okay. You know what? I’ll pay this forward. Tomorrow night I’ll drive out to your house and make supper for you. (He’s suddenly deadly serious.) What’s your address?

DEBBIE: Oh, trust me: that ain’t happening.

[She starts to walk away but he blocks her.]

FRANK: You’re not going to let me be generous? Come on: “it’s just supper.” Give me your address. I’ll bet I could find out… (He reads her nametag.) Debbie. I’ll just ask around town and see if someone won’t be helpful…and tell me where Debbie lives.

[Pause. She feels this threat.]

DEBBIE: You need to leave. We’re closed.

FRANK: I’m trying to be nice, here, Debbie. A little supper for you and me. Oh – and your little boy, too, right? You think he’ll open the door for me if I bring a box of Pop-Tarts?

DEBBIE: You are two seconds away from Gerald coming out here and throwing you in your car.

FRANK: Yeah? Your heart racing, Debbie? You think I might be there tomorrow night when you get home from your shift?

DEBBIE: I am dead serious.

FRANK: Good. Now you know how I feel.

[He starts to walk away.]

DEBBIE: You will not do this to me.

FRANK: I was just making a point. It’s a whole lot different when you’re the one who’s vulnerable, isn’t it?

DEBBIE: I’m stronger than you.

FRANK: (a half-hearted apology) I’m not going to do anything.

DEBBIE: You want to talk about thugs, cowboy? Let’s talk about ‘em. Because I’ve put up with men like you plenty in my life.

FRANK: Look, I was just trying to make a point.

DEBBIE: Yeah, you made a lot of points already, so let me make my point. That guy comes in here and pays for your supper, and you call him a thug. But you come in here and call me stupid, and then you threaten me?

FRANK: I wasn’t going to do anything, I was just—

DEBBIE: I think we know who the real thug is. Don’t we?

FRANK: I’m sorry I scared you. I’m not a thug.

DEBBIE: And I’m not a Pollyanna—just because I expect the best from people the first time I—You have no idea how hard I’ve fought to be able to do that. After all that’s happened to me…? I worked around the clock for years to not feel like every man who approached me was a threat. (FRANK looks quietly at her. She returns his silent stare.) I don’t know what happened to you to make you afraid of people who do something nice for you; but let me tell you, you aren’t strong enough to scare me into becoming like you again.


FRANK: I’m sorry. It was wrong of me to do that.


DEBBIE: Apology accepted. But you should go now. We’re closed.

[FRANK nods and walks toward the exit. He stops and turns to her.]

FRANK: My younger brother was…well…we were kids. The next door neighbor was babysitting us. We liked him. My whole family liked him. And he…took my brother downstairs. It’s not an excuse for what I just did to you, but… I don’t ever live too far away from that day.

DEBBIE: (She’s not sure what to do with this information.) That’s a terrible thing, cowboy.


FRANK: My name’s Frank.

DEBBIE: (struggling with compassion and vulnerability) You’ve got a lot of work to do in the morning. Good night, Frank.

[He looks at her for another moment.]

FRANK: I don’t just. . . I haven’t told anybody that. . . and. . . It’s not easy over here. Okay?

DEBBIE: I know. But it’s not easy anywhere. Trust me.

[She’s right. It’s awkward. He attempts a weak smile.]

FRANK: I’ll see you tomorrow night.

DEBBIE: (she gently shakes her head “no”.) Good night, Frank.

FRANK: Good night, Debbie.


Copyright © 2014 by Douglas Hill

CAUTION: Professionals and amateurs are hereby warned that Cain Town is subject to a royalty. It is fully protected under the copyright laws of the United States of America, and of all countries covered by the International Copyright Union (including the Dominion of Canada and the rest of the British Commonwealth), and of all countries covered by the Pan-American Copyright convention and the Universal Copyright Convention, and of all countries with which the United States has reciprocal copyright relations. All rights, including professional and amateur stage performing, motion picture, recitation, lecturing, public reading, radio broadcasting, television, video or sound taping, all other forms of mechanical or electronic reproduction, such as information storage and retrieval systems and photocopying, and the rights of translation into foreign languages, are strictly reserved.

Inquiries concerning all rights should be addressed to the author at Douglas@dhdrama.com



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